Maven Makeover #4 at Copyblogger
By Roberta Rosenberg on Aug 22, 2007 in Landing Page Makeovers
While my teaching duties begin to wind down, I still manage to churn out my increasingly popular Copywriting Maven Landing Page Makeovers. You can read #4 for Last10Pounds.com here: Maven Makeover #4
Note that several of my suggested changes have already been made to the current landing page which I think really work from a copy as well as design perspective.
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Steven Bradley | Aug 22, 2007 | Reply
Roberta I really enjoy your landing page makeovers and have learned a lot from them. Any thoughts on writing some of them up here?
Roberta Rosenberg | Aug 22, 2007 | Reply
Hi Steve, thanks for the kind words. I started doing the makeovers as an offshoot of the landing page conversion “beat” I do for Copyblogger. So, at least for now, I’ll probably publish them first there. But there’s no reason why I couldn’t republish them here, as well.
Anyone else have a thought about that?