Comments on: You Make the Call – Which Teaser/Headline Works Better? http://www.copywritingmaven.com/2007/11/you-make-the-call-which-teaserheadline-works-better/ A copywriter shares tips, techniques, reviews & cranky commentary Mon, 22 Nov 2010 19:48:14 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: Graphic Design London http://www.copywritingmaven.com/2007/11/you-make-the-call-which-teaserheadline-works-better/comment-page-1/#comment-3700 Graphic Design London Sun, 03 Jan 2010 12:05:38 +0000 http://www.copywritingmaven.com/2007/11/15/you-make-the-call-which-teaserheadline-works-better/#comment-3700 Package 2 is much better, much more to the point than the first one... Package 2 is much better, much more to the point than the first one…

]]> By: Jim Language Translation http://www.copywritingmaven.com/2007/11/you-make-the-call-which-teaserheadline-works-better/comment-page-1/#comment-2888 Jim Language Translation Wed, 01 Apr 2009 18:26:15 +0000 http://www.copywritingmaven.com/2007/11/15/you-make-the-call-which-teaserheadline-works-better/#comment-2888 I will go to the second one if it's still relevant I will go to the second one if it’s still relevant

]]> By: Nonprofit Communications » Blog Archive » Mixed Links: Good Stuff for Nonprofit Communicators http://www.copywritingmaven.com/2007/11/you-make-the-call-which-teaserheadline-works-better/comment-page-1/#comment-662 Nonprofit Communications » Blog Archive » Mixed Links: Good Stuff for Nonprofit Communicators Wed, 21 Nov 2007 17:04:07 +0000 http://www.copywritingmaven.com/2007/11/15/you-make-the-call-which-teaserheadline-works-better/#comment-662 [...] Copywriting Maven compared two direct appeals from Planned Parenthood and asked her readers which one was stronger. What do you [...] [...] Copywriting Maven compared two direct appeals from Planned Parenthood and asked her readers which one was stronger. What do you [...]

]]> By: Bill Perry http://www.copywritingmaven.com/2007/11/you-make-the-call-which-teaserheadline-works-better/comment-page-1/#comment-658 Bill Perry Tue, 20 Nov 2007 09:17:38 +0000 http://www.copywritingmaven.com/2007/11/15/you-make-the-call-which-teaserheadline-works-better/#comment-658 I think the "teaser" for #1 was better, simply because it spoke more to me about what was actually going on. Just by the teaser for #2, I thought of that movie with Nicholas Cage, Bridget Fonda and Rosie Perez. So I suspect, if my thinking on that is right, it would attract less targeted visits than #1. I think the “teaser” for #1 was better, simply because it spoke more to me about what was actually going on. Just by the teaser for #2, I thought of that movie with Nicholas Cage, Bridget Fonda and Rosie Perez.

So I suspect, if my thinking on that is right, it would attract less targeted visits than #1.

]]> By: Matt L http://www.copywritingmaven.com/2007/11/you-make-the-call-which-teaserheadline-works-better/comment-page-1/#comment-649 Matt L Sun, 18 Nov 2007 05:19:31 +0000 http://www.copywritingmaven.com/2007/11/15/you-make-the-call-which-teaserheadline-works-better/#comment-649 #2 absolutely kills #1 (cue rimshot), because that is a far more palatable story than other areas the organization is involved with, and easier to associate myself with. #2 absolutely kills #1 (cue rimshot), because that is a far more palatable story than other areas the organization is involved with, and easier to associate myself with.

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