photo credit: apdk

This little missive managed to evade my usually efficient gmail spam filters. The only thing I’ve changed is the name.

hello
My name is jessy.
I saw your structure today
and became intrested in you, I shall like to know also you more, and
I want, that you have sent e-mail to my e-mail address, thus I can give you my
picture for you, that the nobility, whom I. Here - my e-mail address.

I believe, that we can move from here. I wait for your mail to my e-mail
address above. (Remeber the distance or color has no value, but
business of
love alot in
emma a life),
Please my
love sends you an
e-mail address to this my
e-mail
kiss and
love

She had me at “I saw your structure today.” Flattering? Vaguely dirty? Hard to tell. Here’s hoping someone you care about sees your structure today and sends you a note about “the business of love.”

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